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Wednesday, 5 June 2019

animal report

Tun 4 June 2019
Purpose:animal report  
Audience:Lauren
Plan: in my book

Introduction:Flamingos are some of the most unique birds in the world.
They stand out from other birds for their feeding habits


P1: Flamingos are pink colored white with long legs    
P2: they live in duck pond they get  
P3: they eat fish they get it from Lakes Ponds and sea
P4: so flamingo enemies is human hunter and Lion  
P5: the baby flamingos born like a bird and it has an egg it Hatches after
50 day and it will be colour grey  
P6: flamingo are a  special bird which stand out in all the bird

Summary:Flamingos are a Unique  creatures from other places like
America and South Africa

1 comment:

  1. Hello dorothy this is Lauren I really liked your animal report and also how you did writing about flamingos were they live what olour are the flamingos and what they eat and also about the special think about flamingos and please came and see my blog.

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